支招大作文|可别是极端的动物保护者呀

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支招大作文|可别是极端的动物保护者呀

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In the modern world, it is no longer necessary to use s for food or use products, for instance, clothing and medicines.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

【本文立场：Disagree这个看起来不够“政治正确”的立场，却很容易论证】

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完全摆脱八股文套路的开头：

The use of the fur of s is arguably unnecessary. However, s may still be eaten, and there may be no better replacements of some parts of an as the material for special clothes or for medications.

先考虑“吃肉”合理：

Animal meat is the chiefsource of protein as the essential nutrientfor the human body. Since humans have not found the alternativesource, it is unfair and it is not the time yet to ask humans not to eat s. In addition, the nature’s law allows humans to feed ons, since humans are at the top of the food chain.

再想想，“薅羊毛”和“撸羽毛”也合理：

Admittedly, it is cruel to strip[这个动词，形象了呢。] s of their fur since the stripping takes the life, it is however reasonable to harvest [根据笔者的经验，“烤鸭”们很可能不会这个动词。] wool or collect [根据笔者的经验，“烤鸭”们很可能不会这个动词。] feathers of ducks or geese, because wool and feathers are renewable. The utilization of wool and feathers has been century-long practice as humans have been making woolenclothes or down coats to keep warm.

最后，觉得“制药”还是合理：

At this point, medicines made from s make the only contentious issue. However, it is better to cure diseasesthat torturehumans than to stand asideand watch humans suffer. As a matter of fact, it israre that s’ body parts or organs are taken off生产药物，相反，是器官秘密 所使用的化学物质，用于药物。