支招大作文|青葱岁月不可辜负
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本期大作文供稿：
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In some cultures, it believed that the old age should be valued, while in some cultures, youth more valued. Dcuss both the views and give your opinion.
本题关键点：
劳烦各位烤鸭们仔细读题和充分理解题目的立意。
题目说的old age和youth指的是人生阶段（年长、年青）。
当然可以具体到人群，但是不要简单粗暴地就直接写成人群的特点哟。
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Introduction
Some cultures value maturityand believe that the older are the wer. Other cultures value youth, when an individual has plenty of vitality, creativity and aspirations. It may be unfair to depreciatematurity, it more reasonable put more hope in youth.
Body
Para. 1（内容—TR—是学习重点）:
Youthgoverns（“支配”） maturity, in terms of an individual’s character, worldview, values, aesthetics and many other views. In other words, when a view of something forms in an individual’s youth, it may become stubborn （“顽固的”） or only change to a moderate degree. Th why youth known as a person’s formative（“养成的”） years. Maturity or the old age therefore less important. The decades of one’s adulthood may therefore be a time when the person develops or degenerates （“退化”） on the already establhed values and views; however, either way, the character already formed.
Para. 2:
另一个方面就可以具体到人群（青少年 vs 中老年人）咯，这个理由就是大家通常的想法，正常写就好了。
Conclusion
In some cultures,maturityor the old age valued. In other cultures, youth considered more valuable. Although it unfair to devaluematurity, it more reasonable put more hope in youth.
